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Rose's Story and Scrapped ideas
So i have a ton as usual but not enough thought goes into my writing i just write what comes into my mind at the time. So have fun with my scrapped stories that maybe one day i'll redo. >-> Though i doubt it
ALSO dont be afraid to speak up if my grammar and stuff is bad cause I dont have a good program to help me with these things. Plus If my stuff sounds like an actual book tell me so i know >-> Cause i hear about books or movies and never read or watch them but know a little bit about them tho
Random Sci-Fi Story i started to write for practice....Love the idea i wrote just need to redo it into something more slower than this:
Chapter One
Earth. A World in the Solar System and home to a race called humans. Humans. Overpopulation, non-magical, and completely behind in technology. It’s here where a man has to find his mecha before the humans find it. That is if they haven’t already found the meteor which held his mecha. He wore a large grey hoodie, a grey ballcap, blue jeans and white sneakers. He had one arm in a sling that he kept holding as he looked around s his bright green eyes took in the sights. Looking up at the sky some of this dark blue hair fell in his eyes making him look back down to see a young teen running towards him. She wasn't paying attention to where she was going but seemed to be more concerned with who was chasing her. Putting his hand over his left ear, he started to mess with the device in his ear causing his left eye’s pupil to go small then large then normal again.
GIRL. Name; Ceres. Carrying your mecha key. MEN. Part of a highly top secret agency on Earth. Illuminati? Templar? A computerized male voice said in his mind. He quickly grabbed her and pulled her into an alleyway and magically cloaking them to blend into the wall. His hand pressed against her mouth as the men looked around for them.
“Dammit, who was that?” The short one said as he looked around one last time.
“I don't know but i do know the boss will kill us for losing that orphan and the key.” The other one said as they ran off. The mail sighed a relief before yelping in pain from the girl biting his hand. The girl took the chance and ran down the alley making the male recover quickly and use his arm that was in the sling to grab her. His arm turned into a black tentacle and grabbed her around the waist dragging her into a beam of sunlight with him making her scream. They beamed up to his spaceship and where his team was waiting.
“Can someone shut this human up?” He asked growling as he shoved her to the side as he went to sit down. She shut up finally as he sat down.
“Who are you?” She asked looking around at everyone. There were elves, fairies, dwarves, humans, demons and pretty much every species you could think of; even some anthros were in the room.
“The idiotic man that brought you is Captain Chase, and I’m Lieutenant Lyia.” A woman said as she hit Chase on the head with a hammer. The blow didn’t faze only caused him to move his hand up to his ear device and mess with it abit. The girl looked over Lyia who wore a red tank and blue jeans with brown sandals, her hair was brown with a silver streak that could be seen through the brown. Slowly she backed up from the two.
“I’m Wynter, these guys are Gadget, Moondust, Lamia, Tech, and last but not least Weirdo.” A tall elf said as he pointed to the others in turn. Gadget and Tech looked like they might be humans, Moondust was a wolf anthro with a glowing snowflake on her forehead, Lamia was a mixed breed canine with demon wings. And Weird had a mask over their face, horse ears, fluff on their chest which there were glints of something in the fluff and a long tail holding a giant pearl.
“It’s precious Weirdo for the human,” A very old tortoise said as he stood beside Precious Weirdo, “And I’m Torty, Precious’s translator and companion.”
“Sis next time you hit me be more gentler. My eye nearly popped out. Ceres I believe you have something that belongs to me. The Key please,” He added as he stretched out his hand.
“How do you know my name? And what’s this key everyone keep talking about?” Ceres asked scared. Her knees started to shake and she fell onto them still looking at everyone.
“My left eye can access any database I can get my hands on. Though Earth’s databases is child’s play. Got in and out undetected. Though if that didn't answer your first question then Lyia will dumb it down for you. As for my ket. It’s around your neck,” Chase explained pointing to a small necklace with a tooth on the chain.
“This old thing? It belongs to my dad, all i got left of him after my mother left me for some rich guy.” She said putting her hand on it. Suddenly a small feral panda ran into the room and went up to Chase trying to get his attention.
“Not now Chi, I’m busy.” Chase said patting the panda on the head, still looking at Ceres. Chi nibbled at his clothes gently still trying to get his attention.
“So what i heard was true, you did bring a human on board. A large black wolf anthro said walking in. He tossed something to Chase and the captain caught it and looked down at it.
“My key!?” Chase exclaimed as he messed with the device in this ear. Looking at the key in his and then at the one around Ceres’s neck he went quiet and studied them both.
“So you and everyone else dragged me from my job; scavenging near some meteor that crashed recently because my necklace was mistaken for some dumb key?” Ceres’s voice had started quietly but had finally escalated into a shout making Precious Weirdo hide behind Torty scared.
“It’s the spare key…” Chase trailed off looking at her as he keeps messing with his device. Finally he stopped and grabbed her by the arm dragging her out of the room and down a hallway until they stopped in front of another door.
“This is where you’ll be staying, We’ll be bunking together so it’ll be more private than if you bunked with someone else.” He said as he led her into the room. On a wall was a screen with a tall man that looked kinda like Chase on it.
“There you are Chase. Your mother coul-” The male started to say but stopped at the glare Chase gave him.
“I’m fine father, please leave me be for now. I have more important things to do than visit with you and mother. If mother is so worried have her call Lyia, if she isn't that worried I’ll call you guys back as soon as possible.” Chase growled as as he moved over to his desk to shut the screen off. “Sorry for that my parents wont leave me alone these days.” As he turned Ceres kicked him down in the privates making him double over. His hat fell off revealing his long dark blue hair and the back of his neck where a tattoo was. It was half of an arcane circle with the name Ceres on the missing half.
“I’d like to know what in the stars name is going on! And why is my dad’s necklace a spare key of yours?” Ceres yelled going into a fighting stance. A part of her was scared but there was a large part of her that was itching for an adventure with them if he was saying she was to bunk with him.
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