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    Rose's Story and Scrapped ideas

    So i have a ton as usual but not enough thought goes into my writing i just write what comes into my mind at the time. So have fun with my scrapped stories that maybe one day i'll redo. >-> Though i doubt it

    ALSO dont be afraid to speak up if my grammar and stuff is bad cause I dont have a good program to help me with these things. Plus If my stuff sounds like an actual book tell me so i know >-> Cause i hear about books or movies and never read or watch them but know a little bit about them tho


    Random Sci-Fi Story i started to write for practice....Love the idea i wrote just need to redo it into something more slower than this:


    Chapter One


    Earth. A World in the Solar System and home to a race called humans. Humans. Overpopulation, non-magical, and completely behind in technology. It’s here where a man has to find his mecha before the humans find it. That is if they haven’t already found the meteor which held his mecha. He wore a large grey hoodie, a grey ballcap, blue jeans and white sneakers. He had one arm in a sling that he kept holding as he looked around s his bright green eyes took in the sights. Looking up at the sky some of this dark blue hair fell in his eyes making him look back down to see a young teen running towards him. She wasn't paying attention to where she was going but seemed to be more concerned with who was chasing her. Putting his hand over his left ear, he started to mess with the device in his ear causing his left eye’s pupil to go small then large then normal again.
    GIRL. Name; Ceres. Carrying your mecha key. MEN. Part of a highly top secret agency on Earth. Illuminati? Templar? A computerized male voice said in his mind. He quickly grabbed her and pulled her into an alleyway and magically cloaking them to blend into the wall. His hand pressed against her mouth as the men looked around for them.
    “Dammit, who was that?” The short one said as he looked around one last time.
    “I don't know but i do know the boss will kill us for losing that orphan and the key.” The other one said as they ran off. The mail sighed a relief before yelping in pain from the girl biting his hand. The girl took the chance and ran down the alley making the male recover quickly and use his arm that was in the sling to grab her. His arm turned into a black tentacle and grabbed her around the waist dragging her into a beam of sunlight with him making her scream. They beamed up to his spaceship and where his team was waiting.

    “Can someone shut this human up?” He asked growling as he shoved her to the side as he went to sit down. She shut up finally as he sat down.
    “Who are you?” She asked looking around at everyone. There were elves, fairies, dwarves, humans, demons and pretty much every species you could think of; even some anthros were in the room.
    “The idiotic man that brought you is Captain Chase, and I’m Lieutenant Lyia.” A woman said as she hit Chase on the head with a hammer. The blow didn’t faze only caused him to move his hand up to his ear device and mess with it abit. The girl looked over Lyia who wore a red tank and blue jeans with brown sandals, her hair was brown with a silver streak that could be seen through the brown. Slowly she backed up from the two.
    “I’m Wynter, these guys are Gadget, Moondust, Lamia, Tech, and last but not least Weirdo.” A tall elf said as he pointed to the others in turn. Gadget and Tech looked like they might be humans, Moondust was a wolf anthro with a glowing snowflake on her forehead, Lamia was a mixed breed canine with demon wings. And Weird had a mask over their face, horse ears, fluff on their chest which there were glints of something in the fluff and a long tail holding a giant pearl.
    “It’s precious Weirdo for the human,” A very old tortoise said as he stood beside Precious Weirdo, “And I’m Torty, Precious’s translator and companion.”
    “Sis next time you hit me be more gentler. My eye nearly popped out. Ceres I believe you have something that belongs to me. The Key please,” He added as he stretched out his hand.
    “How do you know my name? And what’s this key everyone keep talking about?” Ceres asked scared. Her knees started to shake and she fell onto them still looking at everyone.
    “My left eye can access any database I can get my hands on. Though Earth’s databases is child’s play. Got in and out undetected. Though if that didn't answer your first question then Lyia will dumb it down for you. As for my ket. It’s around your neck,” Chase explained pointing to a small necklace with a tooth on the chain.
    “This old thing? It belongs to my dad, all i got left of him after my mother left me for some rich guy.” She said putting her hand on it. Suddenly a small feral panda ran into the room and went up to Chase trying to get his attention.
    “Not now Chi, I’m busy.” Chase said patting the panda on the head, still looking at Ceres. Chi nibbled at his clothes gently still trying to get his attention.
    “So what i heard was true, you did bring a human on board. A large black wolf anthro said walking in. He tossed something to Chase and the captain caught it and looked down at it.
    “My key!?” Chase exclaimed as he messed with the device in this ear. Looking at the key in his and then at the one around Ceres’s neck he went quiet and studied them both.
    “So you and everyone else dragged me from my job; scavenging near some meteor that crashed recently because my necklace was mistaken for some dumb key?” Ceres’s voice had started quietly but had finally escalated into a shout making Precious Weirdo hide behind Torty scared.
    “It’s the spare key…” Chase trailed off looking at her as he keeps messing with his device. Finally he stopped and grabbed her by the arm dragging her out of the room and down a hallway until they stopped in front of another door.
    “This is where you’ll be staying, We’ll be bunking together so it’ll be more private than if you bunked with someone else.” He said as he led her into the room. On a wall was a screen with a tall man that looked kinda like Chase on it.
    “There you are Chase. Your mother coul-” The male started to say but stopped at the glare Chase gave him.
    “I’m fine father, please leave me be for now. I have more important things to do than visit with you and mother. If mother is so worried have her call Lyia, if she isn't that worried I’ll call you guys back as soon as possible.” Chase growled as as he moved over to his desk to shut the screen off. “Sorry for that my parents wont leave me alone these days.” As he turned Ceres kicked him down in the privates making him double over. His hat fell off revealing his long dark blue hair and the back of his neck where a tattoo was. It was half of an arcane circle with the name Ceres on the missing half.
    “I’d like to know what in the stars name is going on! And why is my dad’s necklace a spare key of yours?” Ceres yelled going into a fighting stance. A part of her was scared but there was a large part of her that was itching for an adventure with them if he was saying she was to bunk with him.
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    This one is just a random Story i was practicing on:


    Chapter One

    It was the middle of the night and the rain was coming down in a steady stream. I walked through a small town which was in ruins from the war that's caused this great apocalyptic world. It was long before I was born when the war happened on Zo'ell. Had to do something with mortals from another planet wanting to take control over the planet, in the end they caused an apocalyptic world where hardly anyone survived. I heard the mortals moved on to another planet after they destroyed ours and I sometimes wonder if they're still out there destroying other planets with their greed and war. By the time i was born the world was already on the way to recovery and many areas were lush with green and farming communities. But there is still many problems out there and that's how i lost my mother. She was a medic and would move around a lot with the Zana Elite, a military group. She died during a raid from some random group of people, leaving me alone. I never knew my father and since i was old enough to work out in the field I was to be dropped off in the next place to live and work in the fields.
    Suddenly something ran in front of me and snapped me back into the real world. Pulling out my Sorix, a magical disc shape, I looked around a building where it ran towards and sighed a relief. It was a Zaulli, which are about five feet with long floppy ears, a long fluffy tail they like to hide their young in, sharp claws to dig dens in hills and a long muzzle that can sniff out water and fish from miles away. They are favored for their meat and skins, though certain communities breed them for that, and even favored for their ability to travel distances with people on their backs.
    "Aren't you a beauty." I said as I watched them from a distance. You never wanted to get close to the wild Zaulli in case they had young in their fluffy tail. It looked up at me before going back to grazing on the dead plants as they puffed up their tail as if knowing what i said. I giggled before leaving the Zaulli to its grazing as I put the Sorix back on it's place on my back. Out of the corner of my eye i saw a glint in an empty store's broken window and went over to look. It was an old rusty sword that seemed to have survived the many raids in the store from the war, and travelers. Looking into the store I could tell there were some things in there that i might be able to use for example, currency, after the war the old currency wasn't working very well. Too many folk and not enough currency to cover even one fifth of the population so in the end we found Calo, a small gem stone that seems to be plentiful in mines and even in common places. I don't have much Calo so It's always a good thing to look around areas like this to find some so i have any incase i need supplies like medicine and stuff, though i'll trade stuff i find for supplies or even work for it. I don't like using my Calos due to a myth that once you get enough Calos you will be invited to live in a large city in a valley somewhere near the Vanis Mountains. Yeah I know it's a myth but I feel like i should save them in case it's real or if something amazing happens in my life. Heading into the store i carefully went to grab the Calos from some display cases and pulled out a small knife to pry them from some old swords including the rusty sword that drawn me to this place. I also found a rope, a few small knives, a spellbook that was in a good condition where i could read the spells, and even some mortal weapons i could sell to the Unla race. Unla's are short people who love to mine and live underground. They've been in charge of destroying the mortals things since before the war, every community has a few Unla people so it's very easy to find them when it comes to disposing of mortal stuff. I pass by a mirror missing half of it's reflective glass and looked into it. It's been so long since i saw my image, a short skinny teen with long silver hair in a braid, tied up into a bun and multi colored eyes which were gold and blue.
    "Not much has changed," I muttered as I put my hand on my burn mark I got from the raid that killed my mother. Looking down I was wearing a tank top with a jacket and blue jeans with some boots that could hide a few lockpicks and a wand without being found by the enemy. The store looked even more empty after taking what i could and throwing them in my pack. I didn't have much room left so I would have to find a community to do some selling and trading, along with looking for work, soon. I turned to see a white tiger, something that the mortals brought to our planet from their own, and it was sniffing an old rusty sword i seemed to have missed for the Calos. I loved these dangerous creatures so i never liked killing them. Over the years they seem to have prospered and now roam the lands as if their new home was meant for them. I knelt down and watched the tiger trying to make a connection with it, I had a rare gift with the animals from the mortal's home planet. Finally having a connection with the tiger I could hear his thoughts and it seemed he was looking for someone.
    Have to find her, master will not be happy if i don't find her soon. She hasn't been seen since the raid! The tiger thoughts moaned into my head. Obviously someone own him and he was searching for someone that has been missing from a raid.
    "Who you looking for?" I asked the tiger who whipped around and snarled at me. I could tell it didn't know i was there and was trying to make up by looking big and bad.
    Who is this? She smells nice for an Elifa. She smells like Master's mate too. His thought came through and gave me chills up my spine. I know they can smell pretty well but what they said about me smelling like their master's mate is what got to me. I never knew my father and my mother never would talk about him only that his family was descended from gods. She never even told which gods either so i was left to speculate.
    "My name's Iris, what's yours?" I asked him making him stop snarling and had a sort of a shocked look on his kitty face. I tried not to laugh at the look he made as his thoughts kept going.
    Not every day some human asks for my name. Then again they can't understand me not like the master. Maybe this one is loco. His thoughts entered my mind and I wondered what Loco meant.
    "Actually I can understand you. Um, may i ask who your master is?" The tiger dropped to the floor and put his paws over his eyes as if trying to think of this as a dream and I giggled a bit at the cuteness. Soon the tiger got up and came closer sniffing me, he then circled around me and his mind blocked me off which was unusual for a mortal animal. This isn't a normal mortal animal at all if they can block their thoughts from me then they were used in some illegal experiments from during the war. These days it's still illegal but it's not like the labs are in any shape to keep working, in fact a lot of the labs have been overrunned by the wildlife. Finally the tiger stood in front of me and sat down, his thoughts flooding back into my mind once more.
    Definitely Master's child alright. My name is Anu, your father been looking for you after that raid. He got word of your mother's death and you going missing. Anu sent to my mind. I went pale at the fact he knew my father and he was searching for me. I didn't know anything about him except for one thing and now being told he's looking for me is kind of terrifying.
    "My f-father?" I asked shaking a bit. The Sun was starting to set by now and I looked out at the sky not wanting to look at the tiger anymore.
    Yes, he's been very worried about you. You probably have so many questions but i'm afraid i can't answer them. He nuzzled me affectionately and i couldn't help but hug Anu.
    "I'm scared to meet him," I whispered trying not to cry.
    I'll be with you when you meet him, Iris. He licked my face and I broke down crying for a good while.
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    Here's a MLP AU Fanfiction. It might be too similar to the hunger games but this is what i dreamt up a year or so ago. I have redone this like 3 times so expect in the far future to see this actually get posted all over


    [I]Prologue
    “Laura time to get up, we still have a long ways to go for you to see Prince Roxas of Southern Zo’ell.” A mare’s head poked into a tent smiling softly at a large bump in the covers. The covers started moving and another mare’s head popped out of the cover eyes still closed as she yawns. Her short main was dark brunette then blonde at the tips, she wore a pink necklace with an empty gem socket, her ears spiraled backwards and her horn was curved like a winding river.
    “I’m getting up mom,” Laura said in a quiet voice as she slowly opened her eyes to reveal them as dark green. She started to fold her blanket making her mother smile even wider before pulling her head out of the tent and looking over into the south where the scenery was filled with life compared to Central Zo’ell which was full of dead plants and no animals. Laura got a letter asking for her to see the Prince of Southern Zo’ell about something important. The letter wouldn’t tell them anything other than that which worried the mare a lot. Her long mane was dark brunette and her eyes were a bright blue, she had a short straight horn, she wore a scarf around her neck and her tail was long with a hole at the end and a purple gem floating around in it. She heard rustling from Laura’s tent and she looked back to see her coming out with her pink saddlebags on her back. She then continued to use her magic to put the tent up and into her mother’s saddle bags. The mare then put her saddle bags on and looked at her daughter. She noticed Laura’s cutie mark of a white quill with pink at the end of the feather and then from the pen nib vines were wrapping around her leg. All the Zo’ellians had cutiemarks that wrapped around their legs and she was no exception. Her cutie mark was that of a microphone with the wires wrapped around her leg, she sometimes wondered how Laura’s cutie mark was the way it was since most ponies would get words written on their legs with their quills.
    “Ready?” Laura asked making the mare blink a few times to come back to reality. She nodded and they set off to the capital of the Southern Zo’ell.
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    Second part:

    [I]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    A tall alicorn stallion stood in a garden watching the geese eat bread crumbs in the pond. His horn was curved like a winding river and his wings were larger than a normal pony’s wings, his mane was blonde and his tail’s gem was blue. His cutie mark was a sun with seashells wrapping around his leg, and his eyes were dark green. An elderly stallion walks up to him nodding his head respectfully, the stallion nodded back as he stretched his wings before he flattened them against his sides again.
    “Your highness, are you sure of bringing her into the game?” the elderly stallion asked the prince making him sigh.
    “I don’t have much of a choice Kole, Discord is getting on my rear end about not having someone in the game for this long.” The stallion said in a soft regal voice as he walks past the elderly stallion Kole, and towards the palace wall. He soon reached the stairs and walked up them to a view of the city below the palace and a darken sky on the horizon indicating the Central Country. The darken sky can be seen all throughout the other countries since it was the center of the entire realm.
    “Worried about your little mare Prince Roxas?” the sound of Discord’s voice made the Prince jump and look around. Discord appeared on his back. He was unlike anything the two realms have ever seen, a dragon with a horse head, deer antler on the right and a blue goat horn on the left, one long fang, different sized pupils, a snake tongue, a goat beard, and white bushy eyebrows. Even stranger is his left claw of an eagle, right arm of a lion, right leg of a lizard, left leg of a goat, left pegasus wing and a bat wing for the right side. He was Lord of Chaos in both realms causing a lot of trouble for the royals in the olden days. Roxas looked back at Discord and frowned as Discord sat there drinking out of a tea cup.
    “I’m more worried about the other royals. They seem to enjoy this more than I thought when you forced us to play this Game with you all those years ago.” Roxas said still frowning. Kole walked up the stairs and joined them nodding to Discord respectfully even though it was obvious that he didn’t want the draconequus around.
    “Oh it’s fun to watch the game and the dark sides of the Princesses emerge over the years. Your father seems to enjoy himself with this too,” Discord said laughing. Roxas bucked Discord off angrily at the mention of his father and turned around to face Discord. Discord had disappeared then reappeared on the stoned wall after being bucked off smiling his sinister smile.
    "Don't you ever mention my father again Discord. He's been sealed away for centuries before someone let him out," Roxas said as he glared at Discord. The Prince knew full well Discord let the King out just for this game that seems to be a never ending cycle.
    "Please your highness, he and I made a deal when I let him out. I free him and he behaves as he plays the game. Simple as that," Discord said looking at the horizon for a moment before looking back at Roxas.
    "I highly doubt it's that simple Discord," Roxas says as he rolls his eyes and looks back out at the view. He soon noticed a familiar mare walking up the road to the city and smiled a bit. It's been so long since he seen her. She had left when she found out she was with foal and wanted to retire to live a nice life with her foal. Now he could make out another unicorn with her who was just a head shorter than the mare.
    "Oh is that the mare you're bringing into the game Roxas?" Discord asked as he looked over to where the Prince was looking. Before Roxas could answer the Lord of Chaos disappeared making him frown knowing full well he was probably going to make them come up faster. If not he was probably getting ready to call a meeting for the royals to discuss the latest news and to gloat to each other about their warriors beating the other royal's warriors.

    Laura walked up to the Palace walls and looked up in awe. This place was so much different than back home in the Central Country. She looked over at her mother who walked over to a guard and started to speak to him in a low voice, after a bit the guard let them through the gate. Laura's mother led her through the gate and through the palace yard to what looked like a small garden off to the side of the road that goes up to the palace's front doors. There laid Prince Roxas watching them intently with his bright green eyes making Laura just melt as how handsome he was compared to the stallions she's seen in her lifetime. She felt like she was blushing so hard that even the swans in the nearby pond could notice.
    "He has that effect on all the mares sweetie," Her mother whispered noticing how her daughter was looking at the Prince. She looked over at her mother realizing she forgot her manners and bowed to the Prince glad to know she wasn't the only mare alive that was affected by his looks.
    "Please sit and enjoy the day with me. How's it going back home, Siya?" Roxas asked looked over at the mare who laid down across from him. Laura sat beside her mother and then feeling a bit too tall went to a laying position and watches as a servant came over with snacks and drinks for them all.
    "Everything is okay, the King been behaving and leaving us alone which makes the elders wonder what's going on." Siya replied as she nodded respectfully to the servant as they handed her some cookies and tea.
    "That's good to know, as long as everyone isn't in a panic mode not much i'm allowed to do as per the agreement after he was released by Discord. Thank you so much for bringing us some refreshments," Roxas said the last part smiling at the servant who smiled back and nodded. Laura quietly watched the swans losing interest quickly in the small talk. She was prone to getting distracted and losing interest in a lot of stuff not because she was bored but cause it just didn't interest her that much compared to reading and writing about adventure and science fiction. Suddenly the voices of her mother and the Prince started to fade away as she listened to the sounds of everything else. The guards talking to each other, did she hear one of the snoring lightly as if sleeping on the job? Smiling she heard some geese fly overhead making noises as if speaking to each other or where they speaking to the swans? Suddenly she heard laughing and she snapped back to reality. Looking from Roxas and her mother obviously they had just shared something about her cause they looked at her smiling.
    "Your right Siya she does daze off but i highly doubt she was daydreaming. Laura what were you thinking while dazing off into what seemed like a daydream?" As the Prince asked Laura could tell he knew exactly that she wasn't daydreaming. Blushing she looked away before saying, "I watched the swans and could hear the guards talking to themselves and i think i heard one snoring lightly. I then heard geese making noise as if speaking to each other or maybe they were talking to the swans."
    "Well now see Siya she isn't daydream she's just tunes out those talking around her just to hear what's going on farther away," Roxas said smiling at Laura. Siya smiled as she looked over at Laura, "So it seems." Laura looked down at her hooves embarrassed a bit as she focuses on the grass watching it sway in the light breeze.
    "Come let us head inside and talk about the reason i had asked for Laura." Roxas said getting up and stretching his back legs. Siya and Laura got up as well and as a servant cleaned up the area Roxas led them inside into a hallway that opened up into a large entrance way. The hallways held a portrait of each royal including the King and his wife who died shortly after having Princess Roxim. Laura could name each of the royals including the semi royals like Lady Rose Codex, head of the Codex Clan in the Zo'ell realm. Not everyone knows of all the semi royals since they're not exactly on the news all the time like the royals. The Prince took a left turn in the entrance way and went into a side door that seemed to be an office. Laura and Siya followed quietly into the office and went to sit down in the chairs that was in front of a large desk. Roxas walked over to the window and looked out frowning a bit at the horizon before looking over at the two mares.
    "I asked for Laura for she's the only one I can bring into the game Siya." Roxas spoke in a low voice as if worried someone might overhear them. Laura's ears pricked up at the mention of the game. She never heard of a game the royals played but she could sense they were up to something if the King was released from prison. The fact that he mentioned she was the only one to bring into the game made her curious to what it was.
    "I feared that was why you wanted her," Siya said frowning. She knew exactly what the game was and didn't like it what so ever but she had no choice. Once a royal chose their pawn they automatically joined the game and the Lord of Chaos takes them to a starting Safehouse.
    "I'm sorry Siya but it must happen, Discord is getting a little to impatient with me," Roxas said sighing.
    "It's alright I knew this day would come," Siya said looking at Laura, "Laura this is where we part ways. I do hope you do your best for Prince Roxas." Laura only nodded now worried of not having her mother there to give her advice like she used to when Laura wasn't sure what to do with her life. Siya looked over at the Prince and said, "You better take good care of her Prince Roxas, she's still my baby filly in my eyes." She then gets up and goes to leave stopping to nuzzle Laura who nuzzled her back.
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    Third Part (I forgot the character limit >_<)


    "But mother..." Laura trailed off when her mother just shook her head at her.
    "It's time for you to leave my nest Laura," Siya said as she looked at her daughter sternly. Laura frowned and nodded making Siya smile as she left them.
    "I'll take good care of her as much as I can Siya, I promise." Roxas said watching her leave. She looked back at Roxas with a stern look and said, "You better cause if you don't i'll make sure your life is miserable." Laura nearly fell out of the chair hearing her mother threaten the Prince. Roxas only nodded an understanding as she left the room to head home.
    "Come Laura, I have little time to explain things before Discord will come to get you." Roxas said as he led her out of the office and into another room that was small and only held a few items in a display case. The items were a gem meant to fit in a necklace like hers, earring with a feather dangling by a golden chain, two cards that looked like credit cards, saddlebags that looked exactly like Laura's pink bags and a spell book.
    "The gem is meant for identification on others, bring up a virtual screen that can be used for many things. These cards will hold your currencies. Two different currencies, one for normal items and the other for special items. The earring will hide your aura from the others including the other Royals so they can't tell what your aura is. These saddlebags are meant to hold more than what yours can hold since you'll be all over the two realms. And the spellbook is to expand your knowledge of magic, over time you'll earn more and I'll have them sent to you." Roxas explained as he put the gem in her necklace and replacing her old saddle bags with the new ones. Laura took all this in and nodded biting her lip as questions swelled up inside her. Roxas then went behind the display and pulls out a dress and a circlet and tucked them away in her saddle bags.
    "You might need these for any formal balls. Yes they have them every so often to give everyone a break but remember to not give out too much information about yourself to anyone even if they're friendly. It's usually every Pony for themselves or for their Royal. Since you're the only one i'm bringing in you'll be on your own, I'm sorry i can't bring anyone else in with you." Roxas added frowning.
    "What's the game that you keep talking about?" Laura asked finally unable to take it anymore.
    "Glad you asked Laura!" Laura and Roxas looked around hearing the famous laugh of the Lord of Chaos, he appeared beside Laura and hugs her. "It's such a great game I'm sure you'll learn it pretty quickly just like your father!" Laura's ears pricked at the word father and was about to say something but before she could Discord took her and they appeared in front of a house that had a small sign in the yard saying "Newbie Safehouse".
    "You'll stay here and learn the rules then when you believe you're ready you may leave and head out into the realm. I hope to see how well you do Laura!" Discord said smiling as he disappeared. Laura looked around the place realizing she wasn't in Zo'ell anymore and went to go inside to figure out what was going on.[/I][/I]
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    Lots of potential with these stories, would be interesting to see some of them fleshed out fully...in particular that untitled second story.

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    Thanks I plan to work on them more. I forgot today i cant do much of anything due to Thanksgiving Dinner in my community building for us residents >.< So I shall be working on writing for now.
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    MLP Fanfiction type of story idea i had going on x.x

    Prologue







    It was the middle of the day when the Everfree forest started to glow, causing all the ponies nearby and inside to stop and stare. The glow wasn’t as bright as the sun but it wasn’t as dark as the moon either, instead the glow was that of dawn and dusk and the forest seemed to be crawling with strange life forms that appear and disappear. Some were creatures you would never see in Equestria, others would look like they were mutated in some way from the creatures you normally see in the forest. The strangest of all were ponies, but they didn’t look like any ponies you've ever seen before. Their ears were larger and deformed while their tails showed gems floating in a hole, some seemed to have another gem on their body that was the same as their tail gem. The Ponies in and around the forest started to get spooked after seeing a few Changelings appear and disappear. They all started towards a castle where one of their princesses lived, her name was Princess Twilight; the princess of friendship.

    A purple unicorn had already seen some of the things there were happening from a window at her school. She was tearing her library apart looking for information about what was going on, she had already sent a letter to Celestia and Luna about the forest. Spike was sitting on a pillow watching her as she ran across the room back and forth with books floating around after her. He was a green dragon with purple spikes and wasn’t sure how to help her this time. Even he didn’t know where to find information.

    “How long has she been running around like this?” A mare’s voice was heard behind Spike making him look behind him at a lighter purple unicorn.
    “Oh about half an hour, how’s things looking outside Starlight?” He asked, shrugging.
    “Not too good, Changelings have been seen now. And I swear I saw a tall alicorn in the hallway on my way here.” Starlight added as five other ponies entered the library.
    “We sent a letter to the princesses, but it’s kind of weird how they haven’t sent a letter back yet.” Spike replied as he waved to the other ponies.
    “Twilight is Twilighting hard again,” a pink earth pony said, hopping over to Spike and Starlight.
    “I am NOT Twilighting!” Twilight exclaimed as she stopped to look over at her friends. She magically put the books down in piles and trotted over to the group.
    “This isn’t something you see everyday darling,” a white unicorn with a beautiful mane and tail said looking appalled at the pink earth pony.
    “Even animals are spooked,” a quiet voice from behind them stated. It was a yellow pegasus with a bunch of animals around her shaking in fear. Except for a bunny who looked like it was ready to fight whatever was causing the strange things.
    “That’s for sure, Tank won’t come out of his shell.” a blue pegasus with rainbow mane and tail replied holding her pet turtle.
    “Twilight what’s going on?” a tan earth pony asked in a country accent. They all looked at her, hoping for some kind of information. Only it wasn’t Twilight that replied but a deep voice that seemed to echo off every wall.
    “Nothing to worry about, just another realm overlapping Equestria. The realms return to normal in another hour or so. Interesting how you guys can see it but the other realm can not.” the voice explained. The ponies started to group together and make a circle so they had eyes in all directions. Twilight puffed out her wings and her horn began to glow as she looked around.
    “What’s this? A new Princess in Equestria? I must be far behind on times.” The voice sighed as there were a popping sound and a flash of light. Where there was nothing but books piled high was now a tall stallion with large curved ears, a long tail with a pink gem in a hole at the end of the tail. He was a brown alicorn with huge fluff around his neck and long fetlocks making him look bigger than his usual size. He bowed to Twilight just as two alicorns ran into the room. They were white and dark blue, their manes and tails were magically waving and very goddess like. The two looked from the ponies to the stallion and then to each other before walking up to the stallion.

    “Been too long since we saw you,” the white pony said sternly to the stallion.
    “It has, I’m glad Equestria is doing well since I last been here.” He said bowing to them.
    “What is going on?” Twilight said, making the three Alicorns look at her.
    “Does not one of your citizens remember father? Or did you decide that chapter of Equestrian History was best left out?” The Stallion asked, looking at the white alicorn.
    “What is it that you want Xaiver?” the blue alicorn asked stepping forward.
    “I thought it would be interesting to see what could happen if I brought in one of my own ponies into Equestria. Now I haven’t done it yet as you can tell the two realms overlap for some time and it does cause a panic so i was thinking of making an agreement with you two and try to make an alliance.” Xaiver explained smiling.
    “And what of your father?” she asked as the princesses looked at each other.
    “Father has been sealed away for a long while, that and my siblings think I’m dead so I’ve gotten bored and thought this would be a nice thing to do for both realms. After all, I’m pretty sure the spells to open a portal between the two realms is somewhere here in Equestria. Father left it for those who wish to leave Equestria in the future.” He explained shaking his head.
    “I trust you Xaiver, but can I trust any pony you bring over?” the white alicorn said, concerned.
    “I wouldn’t be offering this if I didn’t have a pony in mind. Though I must warn you, I did enough research to know that if the pony comes over here they won’t look like me but more like Equestrian Ponies.” Xaiver added looking at Twilight, “So mind introducing me to this young princess?”
    “I’m Princess Twilight, the princess of friendship.” Twilight said, stepping forward, “This is Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Starlight and Spike.” She pointed her hoof to each one in turn starting with the pink earth pony and ending with the dragon.
    “It’s a pleasure to meet you, Princess of friendship huh? She will need friends if she’s to survive.” He muttered the last part to himself as he looked up and out a window.
    “Excuse me but what was that last part?” Rarity asked looking up at him.
    “Huh? Oh nothing just thinking out loud again. I tend to do that, especially after being on my own for many years.” He said looking back at the group of ponies.
    “Xaiver, shouldn't you let your twin know you're alive?” Luna asked, concerned.
    “I must head back, Goodbye everyone. And I wish this project luck.” He said before turning into a shadow and merging with the shadows. The ponies were quiet for a while before Rainbow Dash broke the silence.
    “What just happened?” She asked as she pointed her hoof at the empty spot Xaiver had inhabited before. The other ponies all started to chatter and agree with Rainbow Dash, all except for Twilight who had trotted over to Celestia and Luna with a worried look on her face.
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